Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organization.
Why might this be the case?
What could be the disadvantage of being self- employed?
Freelance work is said to be the preferable work for a group of people, rather than working in the special organization. In this essay I will elaborate reasons of this view and the possible drawbacks.
Self employing is a lucrative way of working for most of the people, due to several merits. Firstly, when the work is established based on the owner‘s talents or abilities, it would be enough lucrative. Because, if people start to follow their faculty, they will not be tired and continue their work until fulfill their dreams. Secondly, in freelance work people are not accountable to anyone. Thereby, the work hours can reduce, increase or be flexible. Since, this kind of working have been suitable for majority of works, they will dedicate a great deal of time for their carrier, if they feel it is necessary. Finally, working as a freelance worker give a great opportunity to people to develop their insight into different markets for analyzing market situation for the best investment decisions.
There are some drawbacks which will be appeared in working freelance. The person who work as a self employed will confront many barriers in the his or her field of work which should try to tackle cleverly. For an instance, in recession of market, the person should be dominant enough on finding the best way for selling own goods or finding the profitable investment their money for demanding days. Moreover, these kinds of work have not brought other employees’ perks and benefits, for example, comprehensive health care provisions or pension schemes.
In conclusion, with considering societies circumstances, people will not need many qualities to being successful entrepreneurs. Also, many loans are considered to self employers for setting up their works.
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Suggestion: the; his
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1486.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15972222222 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81056174639 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7396161405 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0666666667 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.345781298957 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125635258409 0.084324248473 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0553435983718 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.233364152992 0.151304729494 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.010303706191 0.056905535591 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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