Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than work for a company. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantage of being self-employed?
In recent year, the technology has been changed, that creates impact on the work. these days a section of worker perefer to do their job independently rather then under a supervision of a company. In the course of essay I will explain the reasons and the drwbacks of working alone.
These days a number of ways provide connection between worker and work provider. Internet is a main source that gives opportunities to all around the for both side of coin. However, using these ways of connection, skill holder and who need these skills obtain benefits. For example, a man have knowledge about computer softwear and in other region a person needs that softwear, they find each other from the internet and discuss the problem and solution. However, both are in win win situation, skilled person obtain more wage and other paid less then other companies. Between this the cost of runing organisation was cut down.
On the other hand, this process had their own drawbacks. Oraganisations paid monthly to their employees even though they do not have any kind of work however when wokr people alone they do not have this benefits. For instance, wood cutter in company with immense benefits and he get these benefits through ou the year while if he work alone then his income depand on the job which he do however weather or other disaster will damage his work. although during his work if any accident happen then he does have any insurance.
In conclusion, a number of worker doing their jobs independently without support of a system however doing work this way not provied those benefits which he obtain in company.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 83, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: These
...anged, that creates impact on the work. these days a section of worker perefer to do ...
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Line 1, column 159, Rule ID: RATHER_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'than'? 'than' is used for comparisons, 'then' is an expression of time.
Suggestion: than
...er to do their job independently rather then under a supervision of a company. In th...
^^^^
Line 2, column 477, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: win
...blem and solution. However, both are in win win situation, skilled person obtain more w...
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Line 2, column 548, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[2]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...on obtain more wage and other paid less then other companies. Between this the cost ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 279, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'gets'.
Suggestion: gets
...in company with immense benefits and he get these benefits through ou the year whil...
^^^
Line 3, column 384, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'does'.
Suggestion: does
...n his income depand on the job which he do however weather or other disaster will ...
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Line 3, column 443, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Although
...or other disaster will damage his work. although during his work if any accident happen ...
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Line 4, column 158, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'obtains'.
Suggestion: obtains
...way not provied those benefits which he obtain in company.
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, then, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1339.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83393501805 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49203660723 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574007220217 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.129831438 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.6428571429 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7857142857 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0689503725431 0.244688304435 28% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0255128568887 0.084324248473 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0135256812979 0.0667982634062 20% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0431925290023 0.151304729494 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0136779515108 0.056905535591 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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