Nowadays, many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or an organisation.
Why might this be the case?
What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?
These days, many people decide to build a company that is under their responsibility, their budget and their management instead of working for other companies or organizations. This essay will look into some reasons which and analyze several disadvantages of this trend.
There are some causes leading to this case. Firstly, if you are successful in your start-up, you can get a lot of money. Indeed, when you work for a company or corporation, you just earn about from 10 to 20 million Dong. Although the compensation and benefit will higher with manager position, it is still lower than the amount of money earned from start-up. The second reason worth mentioning is that there are more fields with technological development such as online trading, digital marketing in which you can establish a company with your money and suit with your ability. We just invest our time, our responsibility and a little money, then we have a private company.
It is no doubt that this trend can result in many drawbacks. Firstly, there is a variety of health impacts on self-employed people. Mental health, for example, a lot of people feel stress when they start up a company because of heavy workload. In terms of negative points, if start-up is failed, it will lead to psychological problems even suicide. In addition, the labor market will lose the balance between supply and demand. Companies on the market cannot recruit high-quality labor leading to reduce the performance of company, it also affects the economy of countries because of decreasing domestic products.
To conclude, this trend is caused by some causes, it might have a variety of negative influences.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, look, second, so, still, then, for example, in addition, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1390.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05454545455 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79923484232 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610909090909 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.595331237 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.6666666667 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125944387554 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0440319826508 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0396512136349 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0774469641737 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0312419122315 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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