Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation.Why might this be the case?What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

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Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation.

Why might this be the case?

What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

The vast majority of people increasingly prefer to be self-employed and not being an employee in corporations or public facilities. This essay will discuss the reasons lead people to make such decision and it will then address the question of what possible negative impacts could this kind of employment has.

A growing body of research suggests that one of the main reasons for those who chose to be self-employed is getting insufficient wage. This means that people having serious difficulties to make ends meet are likely to resign their jobs and set up their own business. Mobbing, however, ranks second among the reasons for resigning. To be more concrete, The Times reported recently reported that 77% of multinational companies' workers who are relatively satisfied with their salary, tend to quit their job due to mean treatment conducted by their supervisors.

With regards to the disadvantages of being self-employed, the proportion of people who tried to make their own business then failed and disappointed, is surprisingly more than being thought. In addition, or perhaps as a result, the latter are likely to intend to return their former work, unless they have business capital and client portfolio which allow them to support their "self-employment preferences". Taking Turkey as an example, according to a business survey conducted by Official Statistic Authority of Turkey, %40 of self-employed people surprised when they faced the difficulties of having own business.

In conclusion, although it is widely believe that being self-employed might be a solution of mobbing or unsatisfactory salary problems, it also has huge disadvantageous consequences which are not unlikely and must be considered by those who are on the verge of resign, such as failure and disappointment.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 38, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'believed'.
Suggestion: believed
... In conclusion, although it is widely believe that being self-employed might be a sol...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, second, so, then, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1538.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45390070922 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.30827498344 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595744680851 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.1411724246 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.8 106.682146367 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.377880309467 0.244688304435 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150964599781 0.084324248473 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113379985508 0.0667982634062 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.242253237937 0.151304729494 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0568115489913 0.056905535591 100% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.0946893788 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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