In today's highly competitive market, The vast majority of employees prefer to be self-employed instead of committing themselves to incorporations or industrialized constructions. I write up my viewpoint about this issue and address the abovementioned question in this essay
To begin with, there have several underlying reasons for employees to choose another career path. They choose to be self-employed because they want more freedom and flexibility in their work, schedule, locations and tasks. They also want to have more control over their income and career development. Being self-employed allows them to pursue the passion and creativity without being limited by stringent principles or an imposed instructions by the supervisors in an organization or employer.
With regards to the disadvantageous impacts of being self-employed, it is having an inconsistent income that depends on the highly competitive market and diversely greater demand for clients. Self-employed individuals also have to deal with finding and retaining clients, which can be time-consuming and challenging. They also have to pay more taxes and manage their own finances, as well as handle all the administrative and legal aspects of their business. Being self-employed can also make it difficult to balance their personal and professional life, as they may have to be under the pressure with heavy workload or deal with stress or isolation.
In conclusion, it is claimed that being self-employed might be a solution for those who think that could be satisfactory of their promotion prospects, it can also appear as counterproductive shortcomings as well as some possible obstacles in any aforementioned cases for those that are on the verge of resign, such as failure or pessimistic.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, well, in conclusion, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1496.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52029520295 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.42971015176 2.80592935109 122% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583025830258 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.9390767788 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.6 106.682146367 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.395472396294 0.244688304435 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.166638136277 0.084324248473 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104187816086 0.0667982634062 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.252260872462 0.151304729494 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0539445793846 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 13.0946893788 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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