In this day and age, People tend to possess their own home instead of paying monthly for renting. Pesonally, I hold a stern belief with this notion and I write up a few causes to clarify in writing.
There has an opposing ideas by several underlying reasons between home ownerships and renting. They prefer to own a home rather than rent one because they see it as a long-term investment and prioritzed advantages. Firstly, You will have a source of security and a symbol of status. They may also want to have more freedom and privacy to balance their personal and professional life as well as modify their living space according to preferences and needs. Furthermore, Having a permanent accomodation, They cover their daily expenses sufficiently, make a sustainable life and minimize the pressure with heavy workloads.
With regards to the notion about the advantages and disadvantages to distinguish betwwen home owners and renters. I still hold fast to the belief that owing to a home would be superior to renting by those aforementioned radical ideas, Not only they have potential merits but also it can tackle certain risks or spontaneous issues efficiently. Moreover, Homeowners also enjoy building equity, saving money in the long run and benefiting from tax deductions. They may also have more stability and sense of community than renters.
In conclusion, this trend can appear some counterproductive arguments but in my own opinion, I still keep an affirmation that renting is inferior to home ownerships by those advantageous merits bring.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, still, well, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1301.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14229249012 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98112818376 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632411067194 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.0424985769 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.416666667 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0833333333 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.41666666667 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151522303923 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0520801462532 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047205457817 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0910638155414 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0125665024664 0.056905535591 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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