Nowadays, The surge of citizen's immigrations to other nations are becoming more concerned. There is often debate that If you reside in a country, you have master that belonged language. Some arguments can lead to be some consequences and unprompted risks. In my opinion, I firmly agree with this notion and I will outline my reasons in essay
To begin with, These arguments can be the attributable to underlying reasons. Firstly, Language is one of the significant underlying factors to decide whether you can be locate in a strange destination. If not, language barriers will cause serious social problems. For example, When you are not good at communication and language, you will not have a deeper insight or consider all situations profoundly. This can result in some conflict in both cultures and customs, simultaneously, it also causes the outburst of discrimination waves as well as skin color rally. Therefore, Foreign language is very worthwhile for immigrators when want to go abroad or live far away in other nations
It is worth considering that Locating in abroad without native languages or international language has practical problems. As far as we know, with today's highly competitive market, permanent residence abroad can also an angle deliberation of seeking job opportunities or career prospects. However, it can also a double-edged sword for participants if they don't know anything about their market and language. For example, America's commercial market is the most developed and attractive for those who have a sense of long-standing ambition. It is a prioritized destination, where ten occupations sign out just one of which can assign this position. Moreover, You have to the language's flexibility. If not, it could be failures and unemployment without careful preparation or decisions
In conclusion, Living abroad is a good choice for many people if they want to a high-salary job. However, it is considered that foreign language can lead to some social problems as well as spontaneous risks, so each emigrators should take measures to have the best way to success.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1763.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24702380952 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11594350945 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592261904762 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 560.7 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.3468216519 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.1875 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.125 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292364461125 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0901189139697 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.062785511594 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171209431078 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0341239897117 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.