Thanks to advances in technology, computer access has gained popularity worldwide; however, youngsters tend to spend too much time playing computer games. This essay will examine some severe impacts as well as necessary steps that should be taken to curb the problems connecting excessive game playing.
There are two adverse consequences that the young have to face when playing with computers excessively. First and foremost, children may likely become more uncontrollable and hazardous to society. Violent games may be influenced children’s minds and made them more bad-tempered, irritable, and even criminal because they are prone to imitate violent content in computer games. Secondly, excessive gaming has a detrimental effect on child health. A sedentary lifestyle stemming from sitting in front of a computer for too long may lead to physical and psychological problems, including obesity and depression. These days, more and more gamers suffer from obesity as a consequence of lazy habits, or they even suicide due to depressive disorders.
Since such impacts are dangerous, both the government and individuals should take solutions immediately to address these problems. The first essential step is that the authorities should enact a law that bans under-18-year-old people access such cool-blooded games as shooting, fighting, and torture games. It leads children can play educational games or other entertainment forms which will help them relieve stress effectively and safely. From an individual perspective, children should be willing to stop inactive lifestyles by joining outside activities such as swimming or playing ballgames. If youngsters spend more time playing sports instead of over-reliant on laptop or tablet games, they will surely get into good shape and mentality.
In conclusion, there are some negative influences of excessive gaming for children, and some holistic approaches need to be adopted to curb these harmful effects. These implications could be resolved perfectly provided that there are concerted efforts done by both the government and individuals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1786.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.68789808917 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0064773812 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636942675159 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 550.8 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.9307348538 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.066666667 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9333333333 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281877711359 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0866108440926 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566149180162 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160311487831 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0382595191867 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.72 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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