Many people prefer going shopping in big supermarkets, while other buyers turn to smaller or local stores to purchase what they need. As far as I am concerned, both statements have their benefits in some degree, and this essay will elaborate on my opinion.
To begin with, shopping at supermarkets offers multiple sorts of selections, so buyers might consider which ones are considered as the most suitable items. For example, a well-known supermarket chain from Korea called E-mart, offers many different types of products from numerous famous brands, and they are carefully put in visible positions for customers to choose from; therefore, this giant supermarket plays a crucial role in people mind thanks to its variety and high quality. Also, people experience the best services by staffs which makes customers enjoy the shopping.
At the same time, local stores also play an essential element to some degree. Thanks to portable design, people could easily find small stores effortlessly which is extremely convenient if buyers want to buy any necessary things, like milk or mask. For instance, because of the variety of smaller stores across the country, buyers are allowed to purchase what they need with ease.
In conclusion, both different types of stores play an important role in people's lives, they offer several feasible solutions to choose from if needed.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 233, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
... chain from Korea called E-mart, offers many different types of products from numerous famous ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1152.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 220.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23636363636 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57468605163 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.672727272727 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 351.9 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.8294884705 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.0 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4444444444 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3333333333 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183437918761 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0670957585935 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0503191755228 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102674881486 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.062286832008 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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