Nowadays many people travel to foreign countries for pleasure. Some believe this travel has a negative impact on the countries travelled to.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In this contemporary era, during holidays every individual preferred to travel abroad. Albeit, few people assume that it may cause some negative effects on that nation. However, I certainly disagree with that belief. In fact, it will be extremely beneficial for the foreign country. Here, I will provide some suitable explanation.
To commence with, due to hectic life style, travelling is becoming quite common among all age groups in order to fell refresh and what can be better then any foreign exotic location. Moreover, it will boost the economy of the country people are travelling too as tourist will spend money in their homeland. Besides, it will also generate ample finance for the maintenance of their historical monuments. For instance, once France tourism board made an statement in which they praise tourists as their contribution in generating abundant funds for the maintenance of Eiffel tower.
Furthermore, because of tourism many jobs have been increased not only in tourism sector but others as well such as in Restaurants, Hotels and also in transportation sector. Therefore, employment rate of those nations are increasing significantly such as in Italy where it was clearly visible that how many persons had lost their jobs during lockdown as they were totally dependent on tourists.
To recapitulate, tourism will never have any ill effects particularly for the countries, Actually, it is providing a helping hand to uplift their economy and also it is a kind of a blessing for the citizens as they can earn their bread and butter because of tourists.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 143, Rule ID: COMPARISONS_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'better than'?
Suggestion: better than
...n order to fell refresh and what can be better then any foreign exotic location. Moreover, ...
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Line 2, column 448, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...nstance, once France tourism board made an statement in which they praise tourists...
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Line 4, column 172, Rule ID: KIND_OF_A[1]
Message: Don't include 'a' after a classification term. Use simply 'kind of'.
Suggestion: kind of
...o uplift their economy and also it is a kind of a blessing for the citizens as they can e...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, but, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, well, as to, for instance, in fact, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1324.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19215686275 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80318377788 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.647058823529 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.9570619218 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.333333333 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06120827912 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186900772784 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0662055345886 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.046479362483 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102695702962 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0749923718985 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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