Nowadays many people work from home. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this situation in particular and of technologically advanced society in general.
What these days lead to some controversial arguments is the number of people who are working at home in modern societies have been increased dramatically. This fact has its merits and downsides which will be addressed in this essay.
In one hand, working at home is becoming more fascinating regarding its benefits in comparison with a decade ago. Firstly, the integral point is allocated to saving time and energy sources. Scientifics evidence show that the modern workplaces are using the internet networks and online cyber space and they can be managed and conducted at home easily by trained workers. Secondly, these findings demonstrate that the rate of environmental pollution and traffic issues have been decreased and the consumption of petrol and fossil fuels are located at the reasonable place. However, many critics come up with different opinion and point out to its drawbacks.
On the other hand, the disadvantages of work from home are becoming a big headache for opponents. Firstly, they indicate that way of establish a relationship and communication are drastic changed and the rate of commit cyber crimes saw a big rise. Secondly, working at home is counted an office work and it could be demanding and exhausting for employees who are suffering mental illnesses. Plus, people are not allowed to do some extra work out or go to gyms or sport clubs due to increasing the working hours. Finally, these kinds of jobs are not lucrative as much as common occupations and have an awful influence on body and health.
In conclusion, however, work from home is an inevitable phenomenon in developed countries, but it should be better they improve the infrastructures of cutting-edge facilities to use more efficient and tackle all the downsides to gain good consequences.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1496.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12328767123 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92445702049 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602739726027 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.9021527799 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.076923077 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4615384615 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.30769230769 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180268642401 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0611574435864 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545649321293 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109413354036 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0429509429075 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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