Nowadays many young people have negative attitude towards learning after they left school. What is the cause and what are the steps that can be taken to bring positive attitude towards learning again?
It is said that learning is a never ending process. But nowadays, youngsters seems to be less keen to learn and prefer other indoor activities like as games and so on. This essay will examine the cause of less interest in learning and some steps to tempt students to start learning again
First and foremost, existence of technology gadgets are playing a paramount role behind less interest of learning among today's generation kid. Moreover, due to both working parents, less guideline is given to the youngsters which uplift their interest in learning stuff. Adding to it, in today's fast era, people are more career oriented and are always in rush to settle their career after schooling instead of learning. That is why they cannot explore their vision of learning.
multifarious steps can be taken to attract people to learn. firstly, people should be made aware with the benefits of additional learning, can be a sound idea to promote learning among school leaver. What is more, parents should encourage their children to keep on learning even after school through various ways. positive efforts ought to be made by college authorities in order to make people habitual of learning
To recapitulate, learning leads to knowledge. And knowledge is a gun which can saves you from various troubles. Hence, one should always keep on learning in order to survive in all conditions
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to stuff'
Suggestion: to stuff
...which uplift their interest in learning stuff. Adding to it, in today apos;s fast era...
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Suggestion: Multifarious
...not explore their vision of learning. multifarious steps can be taken to attract people to...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Firstly
...an be taken to attract people to learn. firstly, people should be made aware with the b...
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Line 4, column 275, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to even'
Suggestion: to even
...rage their children to keep on learning even after school through various ways. posi...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Positive
...even after school through various ways. positive efforts ought to be made by college aut...
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Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'save'
Suggestion: save
...ledge. And knowledge is a gun which can saves you from various troubles. Hence, one s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, so, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1163.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 231.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03463203463 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52090824009 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61038961039 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 349.2 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.2042134386 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.9166666667 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290282331113 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107882195555 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0731898560075 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166117617364 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0884986924797 0.056905535591 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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