Nowadays,more and more people decide to have children later in their life.What are the reasons? Do advantages of this outweigh disadvantages?
In the 21st-century, many couples delay to have kids in their life or even do not want to have kid in their marriage life. It may be results of modern life pressures taking over the parenting roles and I strongly believe that there are more benefits than its own drawbacks.
The very first reason is time. Every woman want to have kid need to go through 9 rough months of pregnancy and after giving birth they also need at least 6 months to take care of their new born baby. It is a big time and they have to sacrifice their job, their career, their lifestyle to concentrate to new little one.The second reason and also is the most considerable reason - Financial. Mostly young couples want to spend money for traveling, lifestyles,... or save money for their later life. All children deserve to have the good education, good environment to grow up and it requires time for preparing.
According to exploded population, especially in many developing countries with very high birth rate at younger age so delay to have kid is a good solution for economy, health, and unemployee problems. Young couples will not only have more time to focus on their careers but also have good preparation about parenting. When people have kid later in life, they will have stronger financial foundation and observation to grow the kids well. The only disadvantage here is health problem. We should not delay to have baby til we are 60s unless we will not able to attend our child’s wedding.
In conclusion, have child later in life could bring more benefits than risks. Young couple should think carefully before becoming parents
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 35, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'delay having'.
Suggestion: delay having
In the 21st-century, many couples delay to have kids in their life or even do not want ...
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Line 3, column 319, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...estyle to concentrate to new little one.The second reason and also is the most cons...
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Line 3, column 457, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...to spend money for traveling, lifestyles,... or save money for their later life. A...
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Line 5, column 499, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'delay having'.
Suggestion: delay having
...e here is health problem. We should not delay to have baby til we are 60s unless we will not ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, so, well, at least, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1346.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82437275986 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56796393579 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587813620072 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.2465947854 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.7333333333 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.53333333333 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260498006071 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0911572943386 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0687525927105 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16175076069 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0249804750556 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.