With the fast pace of life, lifestyle of individuals has dramatically change than in the past. The change virtually includes the decision of becoming a parent at their advanced age. There are some reasons behind this trend, and I strongly believe that there are more drawbacks than benefits to this development.
Initiatively, in contemporary epoch young people were more aware towards their careers and they want to devote their whole time to their work and also want more pecuniary stability before extending their family. Moreover, social belief of getting married at the later age is fixing its roots in the society as today getting married at age of 30 is more common than in the past and then they need time to understand each other before having a baby in their life. So, they can nurture their offspring in better way. Probing further, woman empowerment is another cause for this trend. Woman empowerment has changed the old way of life where a women’s sole responsibility was to look after the children. Since many wives are working these days, they also decide to take babies after they reach a stable job position.
On the other hand, I feel there are several negative effects to this trend. First, delaying pregnancy by taking the birth control pills and other unhealthy methods cause infertility in both partners. This was proved by survey that infertility rate was accelerated to 40% than in the past. Secondly, having a child at advanced age are more prone to genetically defects such as down’s syndromes. Thirdly, a age gap is increased between parents and progeny which leads to tier tensions in the family.
Conclusively, people prefer having children later in life because of career, social beliefs. However, I pertinaciously believe that the demerits of this development far outweigh the merits.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'changed'.
Suggestion: changed
...festyle of individuals has dramatically change than in the past. The change virtually...
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... at the later age is fixing its roots in the society as today getting married at...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... age is fixing its roots in the society as today getting married at age of 30 is...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...ge of 30 is more common than in the past and then they need time to understand ea...
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Line 5, column 409, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, as to, i feel, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1538.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1096345515 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67139384469 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601328903654 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5780634454 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.125 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8125 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.9375 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252103253803 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0713787128578 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.059223063188 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155237018691 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0642231284388 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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