Nowadays, more and more people decide to have children later in their life. What do you think are the reasons for this? Do advantages of this trend outweigh disadvantages?
In recent years, the delaying of childbirth has become significantly popular around the world. There are several reasons for this issue and it could affect family as well as society negatively.
There are some reasons why people put off having children. First, parents in the late 30s and early 40s are waiting to have babies because of the desire for their own house and financial stability. Take the US as an example, the cost of raising children is from $200,000 to $400,000 that is a big amount for young parents to afford. This demonstrates that they have to earn enough money and pursue their career to support for their kids. Second, if they decide to have children later in life, they will have more time to enjoy life, understand each other and avoid breaking up their relationship before giving birth.
However, I strong believe that this trend have an adverse impact on family lives and society. It is common knowledge that middle-aged pregnant women have more mishaps of being miscarriage or some preexisting health problems namely high blood pressure and gestational diabetes as well as their new-born child could have more risks of inborn diseases. Furthermore, the fall of fertility rate can result in a lack of the labor force, which influences the development of the national economy. In addition to increasing infertility with age, the risks of older parenthood also include the parents having less energy and the grandparents having less involvement in the children's lives.
In conclusion, the decision of having babies early or late depends on many factors. Besides, it is believed that having children later could leave detrimental effects on society and family's life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 19, Rule ID: BELIEVE_BELIEF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'belief' (noun) instead of believe (verb)?
Suggestion: belief
...before giving birth. However, I strong believe that this trend have an adverse impact ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, furthermore, however, if, second, so, well, in addition, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1413.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08273381295 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57700864416 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615107913669 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.948866349 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.692307692 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3846153846 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296237270511 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0956734089622 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0634111683894 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15725601687 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0695780143812 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.