It is clear that the number of parents who choose to have children late have been rising remarkably in recent years. There are some reasons for this trend, which have important impact on both family life and society.
There are two main reasons why the figure of the couples delay to have kids when they are young. First, in new era, most of the developed countries such as Japan, America and Korea have a hustle life and heavy workload, which make people feel more tired and stressed. Therefore, if couples decide to have kids when they are young and dynamic, they will take responsibility for not only completing their own work but also nurturing their children. Second, I believe that youth is the valuable time focusing to develop their career and to fight with life on their own without they need to concern about falling many times. So that, they should not bound by family life such as the responsibilities of parenthood.
However, the decision to have children late is unfavorable to society as well as every family. On society scale, having children early could lead to aged population in the long-term, which is the huge headache of governments . As a result, this will lead to increasing challenges in terms of financing pensions, elderly care and healthcare. Moreover, the lack of young skilled workforce and army soldiers would be the seriously long-term problem. On the family life, research has suggested that children born to older women are likely to have life expectance. Children would be less healthy and more likely to get sick, and thus will not live as long. Further, the older parents have not enough the energy and strength to endure the non-stop work and worry about parenting a child.
In conclusion, although people have many reasons to give birth late, this trend will affect badly on families and society at large.
- The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004. 56
- Some people think that instead of preventing climate change we need to find a way to live with it To what extent do you agree or disagree 95
- More and more students are choosing to study at colleges and universities in a foreign country. Do the benefits of studying abroad outweigh the drawbacks? 61
- The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004. 56
- Money is important in most people's lives. Although some people think it is more important than the others. What do you feel are the right uses of money? What other factors are important for a good life? 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 54, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'delay having'.
Suggestion: delay having
... main reasons why more and more couples delay to have kids when they are young. First, in new...
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Line 11, column 186, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...dividual families and society at large.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, thus, well, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1589.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.965625 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45433091379 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584375 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.7800730214 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.933333333 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.2 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346066388069 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110599697381 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0643360548876 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209997925159 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.041129195184 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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