Nowadays, more and more people decide to have children later in their life. What are the reasons? What are the effects on society and family life?
It is clear that the number of parents who choose to have children late have been rising remarkably in recent years. There are some reasons for this trend, which have important impact on both family life and society.
There are two main reasons why the figure of the couples delay to have kids when they are young. First, in new era, most of the developed countries such as Japan, America and Korea have a hustle life and heavy workload, which make people feel more tired and stressed. Therefore, if couples decide to have kids when they are young and dynamic, they will take responsibility for not only completing their own work but also nurturing their children. Second, I believe that youth is the valuable time focusing to develop their career and to fight with life on their own without they need to concern about falling many times. So that, they should not bound by family life such as the responsibilities of parenthood.
However, the decision to have children late is unfavorable to society as well as every family. On society scale, having children early could lead to aged population in the long-term, which is the huge headache of governments . As a result, this will lead to increasing challenges in terms of financing pensions, elderly care and healthcare. Moreover, the lack of young skilled workforce and army soldiers would be the seriously long-term problem. On the family life, research has suggested that children born to older women are likely to have life expectance. Children would be less healthy and more likely to get sick, and thus will not live as long. Further, the older parents have not enough the energy and strength to endure the non-stop work and worry about parenting a child.
In conclusion, although people have many reasons to give birth late, this trend will affect badly on families and society at large.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 58, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'delay having'.
Suggestion: delay having
...n reasons why the figure of the couples delay to have kids when they are young. First, in new...
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Line 5, column 225, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...hich is the huge headache of governments . As a result, this will lead to increasi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, thus, well, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1539.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90127388535 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46156855031 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589171974522 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.2077615255 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 102.6 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9333333333 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.2 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318769181086 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101314046362 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0629924674122 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183711419694 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0297426842492 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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