At present, science and technology both are growing with leaps and bounds. As a result, scientist and experts have recorded research programs greater than ever. Currently, higher numbers of researches are conducted and sponsored by private companies. Here, this essay intends to discuss demerits of this happening outweigh merits.
On the one hand, since private sector's growth and revenue is on the peak in this industrial era, they have enough fund to conduct multiple experiments. But in the process of generating more revenue, they do not share their breakthrough with the government. As a result, their invention remains limited to only affluent class who can afford hefty sum of money. For instance, vaccination for ebola was so expensive that during its outbreak, most of the destitute class was affected with the disease and it took years for them to get completely recovered until the vaccine was made available by the government at a reasonable cost. Unfortunately, this could lead to social unrest, insecurity and injustice into the society. Therefore, it is clear that private sector's control in research and development should be limited.
On the other hand, most of the governments are already struggling with poverty, employment, gender discrimination and numerous other issues with limited fund. And since their resources are limited, they cannot spend huge amount of money after research programs. For example, as per research carried by BBC, financial burden of coastal African countries on United Nations has been soared dramatically from 8% to 40%. Undoubtedly, this makes is obvious that private sector can contribute their fund after search programs since they are not responsible for social well-being. Thus, it is evident that although since government's hands are tied up, common ground is not set and research programs are not regulated and breakthrough results are not shared with government so that authority can make efforts to benefit entire society.
In summary, due to limited fund and multiple areas to be covered, government's role is limited and that is why most of fund for research programs is sponsored by private organizations which further creates social unrest and imbalance in the society. Hence, demerits of this private sector governed practice outweigh merits.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 32, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sectors'' or 'sector's'?
Suggestion: sectors'; sector's
...its. On the one hand, since private sectors growth and revenue is on the peak in th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, so, therefore, thus, well, as to, for example, for instance, in summary, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1951.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 362.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38950276243 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76472970652 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574585635359 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 592.2 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.0993065837 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.764705882 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2941176471 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76470588235 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14504138866 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0500443482885 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495110697483 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0970778770367 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0329864795876 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 78.4519038076 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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