At present, internet plays a vital role in almost every aspect of human life. As a result, traditional conversation spectrum has also changed from in person to virtual; speaking of which, social media platforms such as facebook, twitter, instagram are gaining popularity currently over personal communication. Here, this essay intends to discuss merits of this happening outweigh demerits.
On the one hand, owing to social media, this world has turned into a global village. At present, people can easily reach to their kith and kin residing at overseas. For instance, due to video call feature of whasapp, not only I can be in daily touch with my parents who are living in Qatar, but also at free of cost. Unfortunately, such socials apps were not in existence few decades ago and people had to spend hefty sum of money at STD booth for making an international phone call. Therefore, digital platform has become a prime choice of vast majority of the mass.
However, on the other hand, since meetings and conversations have shifted to virtual medium, some people have become not only practical, but also they lack interpersonal skills. For example, as per recent study by city council, members living on metropolitan areas are gradually becoming introvert. Nevertheless, tendency of avoiding personal touch could be a personal choice which should not be projected as negative outcome over bright sides of digital media. Thus, it is clear that although some demerits which may vary from person to person, merits of social platforms cannot be overlooked at the cost of few negligible downsides.
In summary, due to internet and online applications, people have become closer than ever which is a boon in this contemporary period. Hence, merits of this technological shift outweigh demerits. As such, it is predicted that positive outcome of this phenomena will forever be stronger than negative ones.
- Nowadays more and more researches are being carried out and sponsored by private organizations Do advantages outweigh the disadvantages in such cases 84
- There is a problem today that copyright materials such as music films and books are freely available on the Internet with the result that the owners of the works lose money Is this negative development or positive development 86
- Today children are spending much more time watching TV compared to the past Why do you think this happens Is this a positive or a negative change 90
- Some people believe that teachers have an important role to play in the educational success while others think that it is the students attitude that matters Discuss both views and share your opinion 86
- Some people believe that women should be treated as equal to men when applying for a job with the police or the military Others think that women are less suitable for this kind of job Discuss both views and give your opinion 92
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, look, may, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in summary, speaking of, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1601.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18122977346 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76696568811 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640776699029 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.9038852518 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.733333333 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190846599033 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0623528108247 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572870713932 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119832586021 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0476056165095 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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