Nowadays more and more young people hold the important positions in the government. Some people think that is a good thing while others argue that it is not suitable . Discuss both views and give your own opinion
Some people believe that youngster is not suitable for positions in the governmetn, while others think that young people should hold the important positions in government. While young people might have many challenges when working in politics, I believe that they should take this responsibility.
On the one hand, youngster should not work in politics for many reasons. Young people usually lack experiences and soft skills, which might cause difficulties in taking control of the country. They are also easily aggressive so they might be unable to manage conflicts happening inside the government. As a result, wrong decisions could be made, which have effects on all citizens. In addition, due to their youth, youngster might not be trusted by the community making their politic career face a lot of challenges.
On the other hand, I believe that it is appropriate for young people to hold some important positions int he government. In the globalization trend, the world changes in every single minute. With the flexible and opened-mind of youngster, they adapt easily to these changes adn catch up with the pace. Morever, the life in future belongs to young people so they must contribute to the policies relating to their future. Further more, politics is a stressful job which requires a lot of physical strengh and stamina. In term of this, young people clearly outweight the elderly.
In conclusion, although young people might face many challenges when working in politics, it seems to me that they should take responsibility in the government.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 93, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'positions'' or 'position's'?
Suggestion: positions'; position's
...for young people to hold some important positions int he government. In the globalization...
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Line 3, column 476, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...litics is a stressful job which requires a lot of physical strengh and stamina. I...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, while, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1306.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18253968254 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78292040967 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539682539683 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.632858788 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.2857142857 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253958039856 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0931255793499 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122619240528 0.0667982634062 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174220803649 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114394259054 0.056905535591 201% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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