Nowadays more tasks at home and work are being performed by robots.
why do you think it is happening. Is it a negative or positive development?
In today's modern world, the presence of robots in many aspects of our life has become a very common situation. Thus, several menial households and a few working activities are being done by robots on a daily basis. This essay will discuss the reason for this phenomenon and will also state why I strongly believe that advanced skilled robots are a huge development for humanity.
To begin, the extremely busy lifestyle was the primary reason for the creation of robots, not only nowadays but also three decades ago. The vast majority of the population works 8 or sometimes 12 hours per day, has lead scientists and engineers to built robots for essential small tasks so people would have more free time. A great example is a robot named ROMBDA, which was released in the USA in 1990, that was able to cook and clean with verbal instructions. Numerous of American have spent millions of dollars so this robot would make their life easier.
It could be argued that this development has many negative outcomes, however, I am of the opinion that the advantages of having robots outweigh the disadvantages. It is evident that robots have replaced the human's action in many professionals, although, they have limited the possibility of mistakes. In addition, they can work without getting tired or bored. For instance, several kinds of surgeries are being performed by robots. Also I pretty sure that the development of technology will soon eliminate any other concerns regarding robots.
To conclude, people's desire for a more relaxing time was the reason for the creation of robots. Despite some concerns by a part of the population, robots are a huge development for mankind.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, regarding, so, thus, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1403.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99288256228 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65922751739 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608540925267 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.4328914417 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.214285714 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0714285714 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148677778403 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0537051695766 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426514798004 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0901518614907 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0321741273247 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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