Nowadays, most people learn academic study at university, but others think we should learn vocational skills more, do you agree or disagree?
Gradually, the phenomenon of students engaging in academic class at tertiary education. However, several people assert that practical skills are essential in today’s society. Personally, I entirely advocate with learning soft skills due to knowledge’s acquirement and career estimation.
Profoundly, vocational skills which can be learn at apprenticeship classes help individuals acquire experiences and information. For instance, dressing is one of the crucial element in daily life that it should be learned scrupulously. To be more specific, choosing a suitable clothes for an interview is differ from selecting a stunning dress for parties. Clothes are likely to impress others in the first meet which might estimate people’s characteristic and attitude. Thus, it is worth to equip practical skills for certain situations in reality.
Turning into career expectation, most students study vocational skills in order to evaluate the particular requirements for future jobs. In others words, it is indispensable to approach to various types of fields such as architecture or trading. Besides, when trying new experiences, apprentices would discover the most appreciate work for themselves. According to some reports, about 60% learners have new consciousness and awareness about the significant of career’s evaluation. It depend on individuals’ ability, passion and circumstances belonging to each person.
In conclusion, I would confirm that academic performance is needed when learning higher education. Also, I would suggest that practical classes is imperative which I affirm is soundly based on the above reasoning.
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean '(clothes)'?
Suggestion: (clothes)
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'differed'.
Suggestion: differed
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Message: Did you mean 'depends'?
Suggestion: depends
...ificant of career's evaluation. It depend on individuals' ability, passion a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, however, if, so, thus, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1423.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 237.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.00421940928 5.12529762239 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.39523781219 2.80592935109 121% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.675105485232 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 16.6925132919 49.4020404114 34% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 94.8666666667 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211959728338 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0630672589494 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482873063362 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115340694119 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392032050295 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.22 12.4159519038 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.71 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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