Nowadays most people wear western clothing rather than their traditional clothes. What are the reasons for it? Is it a positive or a negative development?
Human has entered in an era of advancement where lifestyle has undergone dramatic changes and so is the taste of clothing. modern clothing has overshadowed the ancient clothing style quite significantly. This essay will throw light behind the reasons of this dramatic change
multifarious reasons are there which forced human to jump to the modern clothing style. First and foremost, change is the order of the day. Human started from leaves and keeps on inventing clothing style according to his need. As now we are leading into an advance era, it has been need of hour to wear fancy clothes and current dressing style actually is quite fancy which has forced new generation to adopt it.
What is more, traditional dresses were not that comfortable as compare to current dresses. The cloth being used in old dresses was not of high quality and they used to be a bit much long in size which made people to put them on back seat. For instance, Indian traditional dresses used to cover whole body along with face which was not comfortable especially during summers.
I strongly believe that the change that world has experienced from traditional clothing to modern clothing is quite satisfying and positive. A human should wear whatever he feels comfortable in and modern clothing development is quite comfortable and fashionable
To recapitulate, clothing reflects one's lifestyle and the attitude that one posses toward life. Since human has modernized almost with everything, modernization in clothing was also needed and adapting modern clothing was absolutely a fare call
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Modern
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...hind the reasons of this dramatic change multifarious reasons are there which for...
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...traditional clothing to modern clothing is quite satisfying and positive. A human should wear whate...
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Suggestion:
...ent is quite comfortable and fashionable To recapitulate, clothing reflects ones ...
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...le To recapitulate, clothing reflects ones lifestyle and the attitude that one pos...
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Message: Don't use the numeral 'one' with plural words. Did you mean 'one poss', 'one posse', 'a poss', 'a posse', or simply 'posses'?
Suggestion: one poss; one posse; a poss; a posse; posses
...ts ones lifestyle and the attitude that one posses toward life. Since human has modernized...
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'also', 'first', 'if', 'so', 'as for', 'for instance', 'what is more']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.233576642336 0.247107183377 95% => OK
Verbs: 0.200729927007 0.155533422707 129% => OK
Adjectives: 0.120437956204 0.0946595960268 127% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0766423357664 0.0501214627716 153% => OK
Pronouns: 0.029197080292 0.0437548338989 67% => OK
Prepositions: 0.102189781022 0.122226691241 84% => OK
Participles: 0.0620437956204 0.0403226058552 154% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.7311073112 2.80594681477 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0401459854015 0.0326793684256 123% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0583941605839 0.0861772015684 68% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00729927007299 0.021408717616 34% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.029197080292 0.011925033212 245% => Maybe 'Which' is overused. If other WH_determiners like 'Who, What, Whom, Whose...' are used too in sentences, then there are no issues.
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1577.0 1933.35771543 82% => OK
No of words: 257.0 316.048096192 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.13618677043 6.12580529183 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20517956788 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.350194552529 0.374742101984 93% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.268482490272 0.28420135186 94% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.20233463035 0.203846283523 99% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.120622568093 0.137316102897 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7311073112 2.80594681477 97% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.037074148 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583657587549 0.56093040696 104% => OK
Word variations: 59.9195218315 60.7387585426 99% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0891783567 75% => OK
Sentence length: 21.4166666667 20.7743622355 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.599936038 49.517814964 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.416666667 127.492653851 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4166666667 20.7743622355 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.666666666667 0.814263465372 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 3.99599198397 150% => OK
Readability: 48.2649156939 49.1944974215 98% => OK
Elegance: 1.29761904762 1.69124875643 77% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196889257849 0.332605444948 59% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.13950866509 0.102741220458 136% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0598897564467 0.0668466124924 90% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.600126100264 0.534860350844 112% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.121041412537 0.148594505496 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0838773444346 0.134430193775 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0386168461751 0.0742795772207 52% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.237668185665 0.324371583561 73% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0700039510515 0.0638462369009 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113634568082 0.228012699653 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0414048844041 0.058150111329 71% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.68436873747 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.41683366733 176% => OK
Positive topic words: 2.0 5.90881763527 34% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.5751503006 155% => OK
Neutral topic words: 6.0 1.9629258517 306% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 10.4468937876 115% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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