Nowadays most of the urgent problems can only be solved through international coopration. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
In these days we know about the critical issues around the world is that most of them need a global support for struggling with. For watching all problems of the world, I completely agree with this statement. Through my examples and assertions I shape up my opinion by the end.
We know that globalisation is one of the most critical and vital happening for all countries but I Bolster my viewpoint by claiming that, how to tackle inevitable incidents such as economic crises global warming, greenhouse gasesemission regarding this Universal issue, all countries know that these problems impact on our planet and their countries and their individuals are involved appreciate that globalisation removed from the borders and walls between the countries. Therefore, I believe that these problems need an International Coopration.
On the other hand, our world is face many kind of problems which do not belong to one nation or one district. I can put a Point on the religious wars and environmental issues. Firstly our world is facing to lots of terrorism. Especially, in the Middle East there are many murders or bombing which need worldwide support or assistance. In addition, the people cutting down the trees day by day and built large buildings in all Nations which leads the global warming and increasing greenhouse emissions and I believe that all of them could not solved by the one country planning. As a result, I appreciated that eradicating International problems need an International cooperation.
In conclusion, regarding globalisation and international issues, there is no any alternative option to tackle these world wide problems and eradicate an International cooperation.
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- The table below gives information about favorite pastime in different countries in percentage. 11
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, regarding, so, therefore, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1428.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28888888889 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09830698493 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551851851852 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 114.510886188 49.4020404114 232% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 119.0 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.25 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138532243225 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0575835041953 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0461082475623 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0847767506952 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00691586332328 0.056905535591 12% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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