nowadays, not enough students choose science subjects in university in many countries. What are the reasons for this problem? What are the effects on the society?
The complexity of science lead many people purpose social major rather than science. Therefore, the hospital and outdated technology will be affected in the public.
First of all, there are several causes why fewer students choose science. First, people thought that science is difficult. It is known that studying science involved chemistry, biology, physic and mathematic as well. They are many lesson should be more practice and memorized. However, general people preferred to learn easily and simple. Therefore, they argued that social major is right. Second, Social skills is more essential. Community assert that they are human being and need another neighbor to be able survive in life. Communication skills is a key to make good relationship with people, another skills such as negotiation skills is necessary to make deal with them. These talents can be taught at social faculty.
In other hand, clinic and old technology will be affected. The less students interest to science, the fewer people at healthy department. There will be little quantity of doctors, however recently more people come to hospital due to the low immune effected by environment and climate. Therefore, demand will be higher than supply. Hence, it is going to the low service quality. In addition, the sophisticated technology in current era related to science. Then, the more technology advanced, the more complex science into the stuff. Nonetheless, if there are few pupils admire to science, it can be said that technology will not be developed well. Then, the country will be outdated. For instance, the fundamental knowledge of Artificial Intelligent is math since AI needs coding. Furthermore, coding is a combination of math system.
In conclusion, fewer people choose science in many nations due to the difficulty of science, consequently it can impact to the hospital.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: fewer
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, nonetheless, second, so, then, therefore, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1577.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34576271186 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75419504531 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562711864407 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.124729787 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.7083333333 106.682146367 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.2916666667 20.7667163134 59% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 6.875 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0827488437447 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0249302170821 0.084324248473 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0310311887795 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0647096097631 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0220992620179 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.84 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.2 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.86 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 9.78957915832 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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