Nowadays old people continue their work at home, as well as students learn from online classes rather than going to school.
Is this positive development?
Discuss what are the reasons behind this?
Current scenario, coping with any work by sitting down at home has become a new trend, since many olders and students find it enchanting to work or study at home owing to esay accessibility of technology in extremely low price. What I reckon is that this phenomenon is proved to be beneficial exceedingly. Reasons behind my notion are discussed in the ensuing paragraphs.
To engender with, employees who may not able to work by standing out at 7 to 8 hours in the job have now changed their way of doing their jobs. As technology has certainly all the tools, which are required to revealing readings of any machinery, for an instance, old workers may have initiated it work from home. This can aid them to ruin either the level of stress or chances to health threats. Consequently, despite lacking of presences of experienced labours, the level of productivity still remains splendid enough.
Besides this, as far as studies of students are concerned, it would be essential to study online as it is now available in this pandemic (Covid-19). The possibilities to getting infected by any grim viruses is seemed to be less in accordance of going out at a school. For example, although learners in India have been not attending classes physically, they have been provided relatively rational knowledge of each subjects in online classes, which could be possible due to convenient prices of internet. Pupils just have to switch on mobile data and join the classes, which is jejure work for them.
In conclusion, the plunge in prices of technology opens the door to work by staying out at home for older staffs, as well as it made easy learning for students in such dreadful situations of hazardous griefs.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, consequently, may, so, still, well, for example, i reckon, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1421.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88316151203 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7732661369 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625429553265 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.3330251471 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.416666667 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.25 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269168475184 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0850789812636 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0436707187748 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149931661449 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0381627785067 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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