Today more people are overweight than ever before.
What in your opinion are the primary causes of this?
What are the main effects of this epidemic?
Current scenario, obesity has become increasingly obsequious problem as accordance to the past for multitude of individuals. What I reckon is that owing to jejune causes like sedentary lifestyle of people and excessive amount of junk food consumption this happens. This eassy not only highlights problems associated to this obesity, but also provides its effects in the ensuing paragraphs.
To engender with, it can be observed that denizens are experiencing to live sedentary lifestyle, be it, watching T.V by setting at sofa or not try to work as much as it is required. Hence, their calories cannot be burned in needed amount, as a consequence they have cranked to evolve fat and later on they will become overweight. Besides this, in this contemporary era, people get a lot of pleasure out of eating junk food, since it has a splendid test which could satisfy people's tounge. Nevertheless, when it comes to maintain well-beging and weight, junk food must be avoided to eat. For example, pizza contains 70% of refined weat flour that is noxious to our health and it results positively to soar weight.
As there are several problems arise with overweight, it impacts harmful on people lives and health. Having nothing to cope with, expect eating and seating is cause boredom for the people, and they will become lethargic in future. In addition, obesse masses cannot make their health fully protected with some hazardous griefs. While delightly acquiring fast food is very tasty and may be convenient, it can bring cardiovascular disease and strokes. Thus, life span of obese people is lower than normal weight individuals.
In conclusion, being overweight seems to be highly enhancing threat nowadays as peole are relying on secondary life style and firmly interested to including fast food on their daily meals. Without any doubt, effects of being obese cannot be overwhelmed as it paves the way of laziness and results serious body disease.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 116, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: V
... sedentary lifestyle, be it, watching T.V by setting at sofa or not try to work a...
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Line 5, column 220, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
... people, and they will become lethargic in future. In addition, obesse masses cannot make...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, if, may, nevertheless, second, so, thus, well, while, for example, i reckon, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1638.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13479623824 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72015790868 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.655172413793 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.4474775456 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.2 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2666666667 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15286484334 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0499629366678 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0638532578922 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0959311566487 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0664950381125 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.78 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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