Today more people are overweight than ever before. What in your opinion are the primary causes of this? What are the main effects of this epidemic?
It is true that the obesity rate around the world has increased exceptionally in recent years. There are a number of reasons behind this phenomenon and several detrimental effects that may endanger the lives of many people.
In my opinion, the foremost cause of obesity is due to the inactive lifestyles and unhealthy eating habits. Today more and more people are relying on vehicles to move around and enjoying inactive leisures activities, a pertinent example of this is watching television or surfing the internet. These actions lower the burned calories in a day and get people out of shape. Furthermore, the preferences for fast food and processed food has grown considerably due to their conveniences and affordable prices. In addition, many commercials and marketing strategies including discounts, coupons or buy 2, gift 1 have also contributed to the favoring of the young generation. Consequently, the characteristics of being high in calories and easy to absorb of the named type of food has become one of the major roots of the constantly growing number of overweight individuals.
The epidemic has undoubtedly created detrimental effects on the life of citizens around the world. Overweight is the main cause of many fatal diseases, for instance high blood pressure or heart attacks which in fact has taken many lives of people in the modern days. Another effect of this phenomenon is that obesity may cause low productivity during work. As fat people are considered low in mobility and stamina, they may find it hard to work in a speed and stressful modern day workings, therefore, disrupting the flow of the workplace. In addition, there is anecdotal evidence that many workplaces will choose a person not only based on their diploma or experience but also how they can maintain a healthy daily life, which are not for overweight or obese people.
In conclusion, The epidemic of overweight, which happens due to the laziness and unhealthy diet of individuals, has caused a negative effect on one person’s health and productivity at work.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, if, may, so, therefore, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1726.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1369047619 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93690741599 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553571428571 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 552.6 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.128259522 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.285714286 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.85714285714 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198371834771 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0629492665261 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541471350193 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112135860775 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0240724317901 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.