More and more people today are choosing to eat only healthy food and are making time
to exercise regularly. Why is this? What can be done to encourage other people to eat
only healthy food and to make time to exercise regularly?
Nowadays, a rise in the number of people choosing to follow a healthy diet and save time for working out regularly can be clearly seen. This phenomenon can be explained by the numerous benefits it brings and how simple it is to be encouraged to follow these healthy lifestyles. This essay will discuss the reason why people do it and what we can do to encourage others to follow.
On the one hand, I believe that it is of the significant life-changing benefits that keep people to follow these lifestyles. Firstly, By following a strict and healthy diet, you will live a longer and healthier life.Since you follow a strict diet and exercise regularly, you are training your body to become stronger and lower the rate of getting harmful diseases such as: cancer, obesity, …. An example can be related to this is the Japanese people whose diet and exercise on a regular basis are considered as the healthiest people in the world with high expectancy and low rate of obesity. Secondly, these lifestyles will give you a huge amount of opportunities for occupations that are related to your physical conditions. For instance, jobs such as : athletics, physical trainers,and models require a certain amount of training and a healthy diet to keep their bodies in good shape. In other words, many people follow these actions either for work requirements or for opportunities of getting a job.
On the other hand , two major ways can be done for people to commit themselves with these lifestyles.First, we should give people a clear vision of what they want and will achieve in the future by doing this. People are more motivated if they know what reward will await them at the end of the road, so guiding and showing them what they may achieve, for instance: health, job opportunities, respect from others,..., will boost up their motivations. Furthermore, these actions of eating healthy and exercising daily can easily be done if a high number of people participated in it. People tend to follow a trend, especially if the people around them are all doing it. By grouping up people who want to follow it and giving them a person to guide them, their sense of responsibility will skyrocket and they will be more committed to it.An example of this are the applications of group exercising in gym classes where a large number of people joining in class every few days a week with an instructors and a neat timetable.
In conclusion, The majority of people eat healthy food and exercise so they can achieve benefits to their health or career.In addition, we can motivate people to follow this healthy lifestyle by giving them a clear goal and a sense of responsibilities of their own self.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 24.0651302605 208% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 41.998997996 150% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2223.0 1615.20841683 138% => OK
No of words: 462.0 315.596192385 146% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81168831169 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63618218583 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80978862568 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487012987013 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 702.9 506.74238477 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.8247173302 49.4020404114 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.2 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.8 20.7667163134 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.6 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310727905707 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119327499055 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0775168734191 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213624793403 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0581065095014 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.21 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.