Nowadays, people are spending more time in the workplace and staying away from home for work.
Discuss its advantages and disadvantages with your own experiences.
For some reason, people these days are staying in their workplace rather than spending time with family in their home. however, many individuals are divided by their opinions if this is beneficial or detrimental to their relationship with people surrounding them. this essay will discuss both points of view and state my opinion.
On the one hand, it is quite impossible to deny the importance of work for the majority of people. it is considered by many that work is the most fundamental aspect of living and has a plethora of advantages in every individual. there are various reasons why people are spending much time in the workplace rather than at home. Firstly, being in the workplace over time is extremely important as this is a challenging task and an extra income to finish a job that has been assigned by their superior. Secondly, it is true to believe that being at work most of the time could lead to a beneficial effect in our health such as making us mentally and physically active. Lastly, showing dedication to our job is a way of impressing our superior.
On the other hand, although there are many benefits, there are some drawbacks to consider. spending over time is indeed a stressful way of living that could result to burn out. some employees can suffer from physical, mental and emotional exhaustion because of overworking. Another point to consider is the relationship to the loved ones who are worrying too much about being drained from work. Sometimes it could be a cause of an argument from family and eventually damaged the relationship with them.
In conclusion, it is undeniable that there are some disadvantages of choosing to stay at work mostly than being at home. however, I believe that it has many useful outcomes and could be more profitable, and these are indeed the reasons why people are working hard.
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- Nowadays people are spending more time in the workplace and staying away from home for work Discuss its advantages and disadvantages with your own experiences 67
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 13.1623246493 213% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1529.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83860759494 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70531494834 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506329113924 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.9530231154 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5625 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259523277688 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0795535111791 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.065168331846 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153863918217 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0313744334894 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.