Nowadays people buy a lot of things even though they don t really need them Why is it happening in your opinion Is it a positive or negative trend for the individual and the society

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Nowadays people buy a lot of things even though they don’t really need them. Why is it happening, in your opinion? Is it a positive or negative trend for the individual and the society?

Lifestyle has undergone dramatic changes over a couple of decades. Presently, majority of people have materialistic attitudes and they tend to buy things unnecessarily without considering their needs and requirements. Here, i would like to account for reasons, positives and negatives of this phenomena.

There are manifold reasons behind this happening. First and foremost, advertisements play a phenomenal role to encourage people towards unnecessary shopping. To demonstrate, nowadays people watch variety of adverts that are endorsed by their favourite celebrities. As a result, they get i...

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 225, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ing their needs and requirements. Here, i would like to account for reasons, posi...
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Line 3, column 289, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...for reasons, positives and negatives of this phenomena. There are manifold reaso...
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Line 7, column 412, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
... of unnecessary shopping. For instance, most of people spend lavishly on a large number of goo...
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Line 7, column 445, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...tance, most of people spend lavishly on a large number of goods and they do not think about the p...
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Line 9, column 162, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: More
...e replaced frequently by the new stuff. more and more use of goods is leading to ris...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, so, thus, for instance, such as, as a result, on the contrary, what is more

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1999.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 379.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27440633245 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80929171463 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577836411609 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 613.8 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 16.0721442886 162% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.9967723005 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.8846153846 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5769230769 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.19230769231 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 3.4128256513 352% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264131894841 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0621036585077 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529272477127 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141462414703 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0282771105335 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.69 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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flaws:
1. two reasons are similar in the second paragraph

2. for 'Is it a positive or negative trend for the individual and the society?', don't need to give both side for arguments, just need discuss one side, for example, 'I think it is a positive trend for the individual and the society. first, ...second,...'. it means 4 paragraphs are enough. if you want to give 5 paragraphs, two paragraphs should be given to 'Why is it happening, in your opinion?'

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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 25 15
No. of Words: 379 350
No. of Characters: 1921 1500
No. of Different Words: 212 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.412 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.069 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.709 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 156 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 113 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 77 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 47 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 15.16 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.051 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.56 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.255 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.464 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.024 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5