Nowadays people dont wear their trafitional dresses for long time. Should encourage the people to wear their traditional dresses every day?
With the steady growth in modernization the life style of people have been greatly milestone , However some isseus remain unchallenged and as complex as ever . For instance , the given topic asserts that should people wear their traditional dress or not ? I am totally agree with the statement and i will discuss it in ensuring paragraphs .
To begin with , in many nation people wear their traditional dresses for short time . It is bad influence on their culture so, that is why most of the youngsters less knowldge about their culture . When individuals of these cuntries wear the tradition costumes on regular basis so, there are many good effect on the tration of the nation because new genration get information about their culture so, they do not forget thier tradition . A best epitome is that a survey conducted from 2007 to 2010 in india that most of the people of the india attract by the westren culture as well as they started wearing westren dresses and adopt this tradition so, that is why new generation also for forget their culture.
Moving further , in the modren era , masses go oversea countries for travelling. When individuals of these nations wear their traditional costumes so, people who comes form another nations can easily get knowldge about the culture of these countries. Wearing traditional dresses help ro spread the culture in other parts of the world by travelling .
To recapitulate , individuals should wear their traditional dresses so, it helps to save and spread the culture of the nation because traditional costumes play important role in culture of the contury .
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- Nowadays people dont wear their trafitional dresses for long time. Should encourage the people to wear their traditional dresses every day? 56
- With the steady growth in modernization the life stlye of people have been greatly affected.They have achieved various milestones.However,some issues remains unchallanged and as complex as ever.For intance,the given topic asserts that why school athoritie 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, well, for instance, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1334.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07224334601 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66846351293 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536121673004 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.6361718447 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.272727273 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9090909091 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.18181818182 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.382249851283 0.244688304435 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.181428932467 0.084324248473 215% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.151138817672 0.0667982634062 226% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.253728624735 0.151304729494 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0370050226322 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.