With the steady growth in modernization the life stlye of people have been greatly affected.They have achieved various milestones.However,some issues remains unchallanged and as complex as ever.For intance,the given topic asserts that why school athorities focus on the traditiional subjects rather than modern subjects? Upto some extent i agree with the given statement and i will discuss in upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with,there are people who claim that schools emphasis on historical subjects.there are so many reasons behind this issue.The firstvand foremost ground is that lack of knowledge regarding culture because in rhe modern era,students are depend on the technology like computer,smartphone so that is why students are forgetting their culture and mostly schools are focus on the traditional subject because this way helps the youth to attach with their culture and enhance knowledge about past history. Apart from it, if next generation has some knowledge regarding past events , moral values then they can be useful to alive culture , tradition , rituals vis a vis about importace of revolution of patroit person in upcoming.
On the other hand , there are individuals who believe that only traditional subjects are also essential to get a good job and helps to become a successful in their life.A survey conducted that for being a doctor people need to study of medical subject.
Nevertheless, weighing both the options,i believe that these is no single conclusion still , i take the ground that an effective clap require both use of hands. Because history and another subjects have their own importance.
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- With the steady growth in modernization the life stlye of people have been greatly affected.They have achieved various milestones.However,some issues remains unchallanged and as complex as ever.For intance,the given topic asserts that why school athoritie 56
- Nowadays people dont wear their trafitional dresses for long time. Should encourage the people to wear their traditional dresses every day? 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, nevertheless, regarding, so, still, then, apart from, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1015.0 1615.20841683 63% => OK
No of words: 192.0 315.596192385 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28645833333 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92596335641 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.671875 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 319.5 506.74238477 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 20.2975951904 187% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 147.231246684 49.4020404114 298% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 203.0 106.682146367 190% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.4 20.7667163134 185% => OK
Discourse Markers: 20.6 7.06120827912 292% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0904483785138 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0428709890856 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0308523767564 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0524140758676 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0165710489439 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.7 13.0946893788 173% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 24.45 50.2224549098 49% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.3 11.3001002004 171% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 9.78957915832 291% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.1190380762 170% => OK
text_standard: 29.0 10.7795591182 269% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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