Nowadays people have greater access to fastfood. Do the advantage of this outweigh the disadvantage.
it is true that in these days most of the individuals consume fastfood such as burger, pizza and other. While people get easily attracted by this type of meal items. it effect badly on persons health. also demerits are more than merits and i will explain the reason in following paragraphs.
To commence with,looking the advantage of the fastfood. Firstly, it is easily available and takes limited time to cook. To elobrate, peoples have busy schedule and they do not have enough time to prepare as they mostly prefer to eat readymade food like Momos, springroll. Secondly, Children get addicted to this varity and consume it on regularly basis.Thus, fastfood is prerfect item for those who have no sufficient time to prepare.
Turning to the another side of the argument, there is more cons than pros. it is badly effected on the individuals health. In other words, it is main cause of the people mantally and physically health problems. Therefore, it has less nutritions and vitamins which people need to remain healthy. Furthermore, this leads many physical problems. For intance, A survey conducted by health magzin in UK shows that peoples who consume more fastfood suffer with many problems like Dipression, illusumania.Hence, individuals who prefer it also has bad health conditions.
In conclusion, fastfood may has many advantages but its merits may not outweigh the disadvantage. Since individuals should consume healthy diet and prefer it rendomly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, look, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, in conclusion, such as, in other words, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1229.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 236.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20762711864 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85071884976 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610169491525 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 382.5 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.5321848199 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.8125 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.75 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.625 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214098129883 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.059898839598 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0573399935119 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123339099418 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0493305176241 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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