Nowadays, people show more anti-social behavior and lack of respect to others. What problems has this situation caused and how can improve them?
Globalization and the rise of the technology have caused less social activities among people. In most cases, people prefer not to socialize and be engaged in their business. This situation has led people to misbehave and disrespect other people, and resulted in some problems, such as conflicts in workplaces and minor crimes. In my opinion, people should be encouraged to be involved in more social happenings and crimes should be tackled alternatively.
One of the biggest problems that comes from not respecting others or anti-social behavior is that it may cause conflicting situations in the offices where people work. Here I am referring to the fact that, as people do not respect each other, it is highly likely that they do not consider individual opinions. This, in turn, may end up with quarrels between colleagues. To solve this problem, employers ought to organize parties where the members of their staff can get the chance of getting acquainted closely and discuss job prospects. This would probably prevent potential struggles in the future.
Another possible problem can be petty crimes that we tend to see on television in our daily life, where children fight with their parents, neighbors have conflict with others in the neighborhood, employers bully employees. This problem, certainly, originated from disrespect and misbehavior. In order to solve these kind of minor crimes some alternative punishments should be applied, like in the Netherlands, where people with anti-social behavior are ordered to read psychological books to rehabilitate them. After reading these books, those people possibly start to have positive attitude towards others and respect them.
To conclude, behaving anti-socially and disrespecting other members of the society is a noteworthy issue that have caused some other concerns, like conflicts between people and minor crimes. I think, even though these problems may seem negligible, governments and responsible organizations should take necessary steps to deal with them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 311, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...pect and misbehavior. In order to solve these kind of minor crimes some alternative punish...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, i think, kind of, such as, in most cases, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1719.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.49201277955 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90057843283 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597444089457 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.2594382757 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.6 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.53333333333 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266644867283 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.090956834674 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0555099481776 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165936570116 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0379098487455 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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