The graph below shows how much time schoolchildren aged 10-11 years old spend in a week for different home activities

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 10, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , spending
...en 2000 and the present. Generally,spending time on TV and computer has changed in ...
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Line 5, column 56, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a contradictory way" with adverb for "contradictory"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ing time on TV and computer has changed in a contradictory way. During the given 8-year period the fig...
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Line 5, column 154, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , wherease
... figures for TV has decreased moderately,wherease computer using has experienced an upwar...
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Line 9, column 170, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Before
...ed maintaining the same level till 2003.Before showing some fluctuations around 14-16 ...
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Line 9, column 236, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
...ations around 14-16 hours during 4 years,it dropped gently from 21 to 15 hours. ...
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Suggestion: , the
... According to the details for computer,the numbers demonstrated positive figures,a...
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Line 13, column 80, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , after
...he numbers demonstrated positive figures,after showing slightly increase about 4 hours...
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Line 13, column 126, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... showing slightly increase about 4 hours in 2000 and 2001,it continued to go up n...
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Line 13, column 225, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Since
...to 16 in different years,2002,2003,2004.Since then it has been maintaining a rise sho...
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Line 13, column 225, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...to 16 in different years,2002,2003,2004.Since then it has been maintaining a rise sho...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, then, whereas

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 810.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 148.0 196.424390244 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47297297297 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48791127476 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.71422551103 2.65546596893 140% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.668918918919 0.547539520022 122% => OK
syllable_count: 217.8 283.868780488 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 86.677332677 43.030603864 201% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 162.0 112.824112599 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.6 22.9334400587 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 5.23603664747 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210276634945 0.215688989381 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123448523389 0.103423049105 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114502598086 0.0843802449381 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140146062798 0.15604864568 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122662064592 0.0819641961636 150% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.1 13.2329268293 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.04 11.4140731707 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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