Nowadays, people throw away old things and adapt new things. Do this disadvantages of throwaway society outway anypossible economic disadvantage.
It is true that people have a tendency to discard the old and damaged possessions as, the effect of modern culture which is consumeristic one. One of the most controversial issue today relates to that is there any economic advantage of throwaway culture?. In this essay, I am going to examine this question from both point of views.
On one side of argument, there are people who argue that the benefits of considerable outweigh its disadvantages. The main reason for believing this, is the social advancement of the society, that is, how the lifestyleof people change with the advent of new technology. It is also possible to say that this process boost up the employment opportunities as, with the raising demand of the products the requirement of the labour also increases. One good illustration of this is the survey conducted by the "Oxford University", where it is observed that the Canada and USA contain only 5. 2 % of World Population till yet are accountable for 31. 5 percent of consumption while South Asia which had 22. 4 percent of population is responsible for only 2% of consumption.
On the other hand, it is also possible to meet the opposing case.It is often argued that the throwaway society have many disadvantages. The additional resources which are used, takes longer time to decompose. Microorganisms requires greater time to decompose the materials such as plastics rubber etc.
The second most important point of throwaway society disadvantage is, the drifts and competition between the friends which creates the problem like bulling, isolation and Classism. With increasing rate of throwaway culture, the classism is rising day by day. Moreover,with rising demand of appliances, the child labour also increases; which is a big problem in today's date. secondly, the loss of our ecological balance ,that is, destruction of natural habitats of animals and birds. we can check the example of sparrows, they are considered as endangered species due to the access use of mobile phones.
As we have seen that there are number of answers to this question. The best thing which one can do is to take the initiative to control this problem. The three R concept of Sustainable development is very beneficial to cope up with this problem. 3R stand for reduce the use of resources, reuse the possible resource and to recycle the things which are possible.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 7.30460921844 246% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1995.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 394.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06345177665 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45527027702 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99024103036 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578680203046 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 626.4 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 10.0 2.52805611222 396% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.2477699514 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.6818181818 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9090909091 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.95454545455 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153338216484 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0380366670183 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0362602987846 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0805877477167 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0309927446921 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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