the graph below shows the weekly earning of men and women in euros for the 16 to 59 age group as per their education level.
The given graphical representation shows the data of weekly salary earned by men and women of 16 to 59 age group based on their qualification. The data is calibrated in euros witches clearly and coherently represented.
It is clearly evident from information that, neither graduate men nor graduate women earns in age group of 16 to 19. The earnings of Below graduate men were €200, which increases to €500 in age group of 40 to 49; In contrast to graduate man, which shows major increase in salary to about €610 in age of 40 to 49. There is no change in undergraduate men earning, while graduate men's salary goes on increasing to almost €700 during age of 50 to 59.
Moreover, the salary of below graduate women shows upsurge during age of 20 to 29, with minor decline in age of 25 to 29; on contrary to this, the graduate women salary increases in age group of 25 to 29 to €300, and this does not show any change till 50 to 59 age group. The below graduate women salary shows slight variation and reaches to €50 by age of 50 to 59.
Overall, the earnings of graduate individuals both in case of men and women are more than undergraduate people, also the earnings of men are more then women.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 147, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[2]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...ople, also the earnings of men are more then women.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, then, while, in contrast, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 33.7804878049 166% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 994.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 220.0 196.424390244 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51818181818 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60306557989 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.481818181818 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 301.5 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.0227710295 43.030603864 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.25 112.824112599 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5 22.9334400587 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.23603664747 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.383896699862 0.215688989381 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.194391410274 0.103423049105 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0990908838991 0.0843802449381 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.255288867472 0.15604864568 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0677320514898 0.0819641961636 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.2329268293 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 61.2550243902 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 11.4140731707 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.