Offsprings are considered as the piece of clay; they can be moulded in any direction. So, it becomes essential for them to follow some rules, that can make them a responsible citizen when they grow up as adults. In today's date the most pressing concern is, should behaviour management rules must be implemented for kids or not? I totally agree with the fact of fixing some behaviour rules for children. In this essay, i will explore the same with some examples and assertions, and will shape up opinion at the end.
To begin with, no doubt childhood is golden span of human life; but it is the crucial stage in which one can make the child a good personality or can spoil the kids by excessive pampering. Hence, following rules at early stage of life can help to develop a good quality among children. This behaviour rules can help the kids to know how to Conversate with society people, that is, how to talk and behave with people; their elders, their teachers, their relatives and their family members. Apart from this, it also helps to develop communication skills and personality development of children.
Moreover, a good socialized the society is made buy it's a socialised people; and the children are foundation of future. A sense of following the rules will make them a good citizen as well as a good human being. A survey was conducted by human "Hindustan Times" which proved that, implementing rules of behaviour among children results in 60% reduction in social crimes and misbehavings.
At a glance, it can be said that; rules for behaviour management of child must be there, but not too strict rules needed to be implemented that the innocence of childhood gets lost somewhere. Rules must be such that it does not appears to be the burden for kids.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, moreover, so, well, apart from, no doubt, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1474.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8013029316 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70097201336 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530944625407 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6343991988 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.285714286 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9285714286 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35714285714 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157332882398 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0621566963622 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0400736717276 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0966115155946 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0439504586697 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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