Historical buildings and monuments are the connections between our present and past. So, they are important in individual's life. However, it is a irrevocable debate that, should the traditional buildings need to be saved or not? I totally agree with the fact that, historic architecture must be preserved. In this essay, I will give examples and assertions to support my view point.
Firstly, every ancient construction which is made have some history behind it. Hence, there are sentiments of people which are attached to them. A perfect epitome of this is, "Jallianwala Bagh" in Amritsar. It is constructed in the memory of freedom fighters, who sacrifice their lives for country freedom. Moreover, it reminds the people how hard it was for them to fight against constitution, which gives a sense of respect in the hearts of people for them.
Furthermore, the second most important role of historical buildings is in the field of art and literature. The ancient buildings have beautiful work on the walls, which is hard to find in modern buildings. A good example of this is, "Ajanta and Ellora Caves", a number of masterpieces of art are there, from which one can take inspiration for modern art. Apart from this, historical buildings have literature and quotes written on their walls which is also very important. This can be seen in "Golden Temple" located in Amritsar, and these quotes are considered to be of great importance in Sikh religion. Also, historical buildings connects us with our cultural and moral values.
Hence, it can be said that, historical buildings must not be destroyed and replaced by modern architecture; rather than this, they can be renovated.This will help to maintain their natural beauty as well as to preserve the historical background. This heavy responsibly ,no doubt, is of government bodies to take care of these beautiful architecture.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, second, so, well, apart from, as for, as to, no doubt, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1613.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25407166124 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07637780756 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579804560261 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.1350511189 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.6111111111 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0555555556 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.22222222222 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177073931053 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.054139032774 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0405533910044 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10265495547 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0183677243031 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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