should a city try to preserve its old building or destroy them and replace them with modern building? use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
Historical buildings and monuments are the connections between our present and past. So, they are important in individual's life. However, it is a irrevocable debate that, should the traditional buildings need to be saved or not? I totally agree with the fact that, historic architecture must be preserved. In this essay, I will give examples and assertions to support my view point.
Firstly, every ancient construction which is made have some history behind it. Hence, there are sentiments of people which are attached to them. A perfect epitome of this is, "Jallianwala Bagh" in Amritsar. It is constructed in the memory of freedom fighters, who sacrifice their lives for country freedom. Moreover, it reminds the people how hard it was for them to fight against constitution, which gives a sense of respect in the hearts of people for them.
Furthermore, the second most important role of historical buildings is in the field of art and literature. The ancient buildings have beautiful work on the walls, which is hard to find in modern buildings. A good example of this is, "Ajanta and Ellora Caves", a number of masterpieces of art are there, from which one can take inspiration for modern art. Apart from this, historical buildings have literature and quotes written on their walls which is also very important. This can be seen in "Golden Temple" located in Amritsar. Also, historical buildings connects us with our cultural and moral values.
Hence, it can be said that, historical buildings must not be destroyed and breplaced by modern architecture; rather than this, they can be renovated to maintain their natural beauty as well as to preserve the historical background.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: an
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Suggestion: agree that
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...historical buildings have literature and quotes written on their walls which is a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, second, so, well, apart from, as for, as to, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1446.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23913043478 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03925690683 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586956521739 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.8123554645 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.0588235294 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2352941176 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.05882352941 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180414893056 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0563945327714 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0384825063863 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104867165988 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0186593099276 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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