The graph shows demand for electricity in England during typical days in winter and summer. The pie chat shows how electricity is used in an average English home.
The given line graph illustrates the need of power in English homes in winter and summer seasons. Moreover, the pie chart represents the how the power is consumed by Britishers.
As it can be observed from the given line graph that the demand if energy in winter days is around 25,000 units which, remains almost equal even after 24 hours. The need of electrical in summer days is about 18,000 units. Even, after 24 hours the need remains the same, that is, nearly 18,000 units.
Moreover, the clear presentation in pie chat gives the idea that majority of power is consumed for room heaters and for heating water appliances. secondly, most important use of electricity is for ovens, kettles and washing machines which consumes 17.5% of energy. Also, for lighting purpose and for entertainment 15% of energy is used . Further, there is same energy used by British people for vacuum cleaners, food mixers and electrical tools such as for ironing and water purifiers etc.
Overall, the provided information forms an overview that the enery requirement during winter days is far more than in summer days due to environmental condition of the area.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2018-06-27 | suman_preetkaur | 78 | view |
- The diagram shows the stages and equipment used in cement making process and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes. 61
- we are becoming increasingly dependent on computers. they are used in business comma hospitals, crime detection and even to fly planes. what things will they be used for in future? is this dependence on computer a good thing or should we be more suspiciou 67
- Nowadays, people throw away old things and adapt new things. Do this disadvantages of throwaway society outway anypossible economic disadvantage. 84
- The graph below compares the number of visits to two new music sites on the web. Write a report from a University lecturer analysing the information shown below. 67
- should there be minimum school going age or should students and their parents are free to decide when they join School. to what extent do you agree or disagree. 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 33, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
The given line graph illustrates the need of power in English homes in wi...
^^
Line 1, column 135, Rule ID: THE_HOW[1]
Message: Did you mean 'how'?
Suggestion: how
...ons. Moreover, the pie chart represents the how the power is consumed by Britishers. ...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 147, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Secondly
...aters and for heating water appliances. secondly, most important use of electricity is ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 156, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... for heating water appliances. secondly, most important use of electricity is for...
^^
Line 5, column 337, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... for entertainment 15% of energy is used . Further, there is same energy used by B...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, as for, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 961.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 192.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00520833333 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52928298338 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614583333333 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 289.8 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.342597779 43.030603864 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.1 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.7 5.23603664747 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314805665501 0.215688989381 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113145085672 0.103423049105 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492090864589 0.0843802449381 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160251297347 0.15604864568 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0305706295085 0.0819641961636 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.2329268293 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.