what problems will your country face in next 10 years? how can these problems be overcome?
It is our present mistakes that will become serious problems in future. There are couple of problems that our country can face in future.In this essay I will explore the same, and will suggest some measures to overpower those issues.
Fist and foremost issue that may arise is, unemployment.It is evident from the recent survey conducted by "Government of India" that, the population is increased by 3 times from last survey.The overpopulation is related to lack of opportunities for individuals to earn their bread. This will also affect the economy rate of country.To fight with with this issue; as the famous proverbs says, knowledge is best weapon to fight, we need to spread awareness among people to emphasis on family planning. This will help us to uproot this problem from society.
Secondly, the greatest thread which can also be seen at present stage is, to our ecological balance.A recent article was published in "Hindustan Times" focused on ecological issues, and the figures was uprising; more than 2000 species of animals and plants become extinct.Hence, we need to reduce pollution and encourage afforestation; that is planting more, which will help us to preserve natural habitat of animals.
To sum up, it is often said that, "prevention is better than cure", hence we need to put our efforts today to not let the hazards to arise in future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, may, second, secondly, so, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1173.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 226.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19026548673 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01379408926 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.646017699115 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 364.5 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 120.238368694 49.4020404114 243% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 167.571428571 106.682146367 157% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.2857142857 20.7667163134 155% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136990515737 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0823520847674 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0820121309389 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0872828069227 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0947410737762 0.056905535591 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.2 13.0946893788 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.97 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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