Nowadays people throw away old things and adapts new things . Do the disadvantages of throwaway society outweigh any possible economic advantages.
It is true that people have tendency to discard their old or damage positions these day when they own something new. One of the most controversial issues today relates to why people use to new things and throw away old things? In this easssy. I am going to examine this question from both painto of view.
On one side of the argument there are people who Angue that the benefits of consider only outweigh disadvantages. The Main reason for believing this is that more people use modern things like, advance serious of mobile , advance cars and other lots of things. Because these days the high company's realise of there cars. When a man sit in that car then, he forgot his death because , when we drive on 150 speed . Suddenly we stuck in Wall however you are never injured because hi protect their life . For example the minicoppe it's that car that which protect to your life .
On the other hand, it is also possible to make the opposing Case it is often argued that infact on poor man. Because they see toward them and buy a new car on borrow. that which is not Gud for themselves
As we have seen That there are number of answers to this question on balance however, l tend to believe that we recycle the old things. Because until these thing are not reached about the deadline.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 79, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this day' or 'these days'?
Suggestion: this day; these days
...o discard their old or damage positions these day when they own something new. One of the...
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Line 2, column 218, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...n things like, advance serious of mobile , advance cars and other lots of things. ...
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Line 2, column 260, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... advance cars and other lots of things. Because these days the high companys realise of...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 380, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...at car then, he forgot his death because , when we drive on 150 speed . Suddenly w...
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Line 2, column 409, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ath because , when we drive on 150 speed . Suddenly we stuck in Wall however you a...
^^
Line 2, column 497, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...er injured because hi protect their life . For example the minicoppe its that car ...
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Line 2, column 526, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
... their life . For example the minicoppe its that car that which protect to your lif...
^^^
Line 2, column 570, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...that car that which protect to your life . On the other hand, it is also possible...
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Line 3, column 167, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: That
...oward them and buy a new car on borrow. that which is not Gud for themselves As we...
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Line 3, column 203, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ow. that which is not Gud for themselves As we have seen That there are number of...
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Line 4, column 137, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...believe that we recycle the old things. Because until these thing are not reached about...
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Line 4, column 151, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this thing' or 'these things'?
Suggestion: this thing; these things
...e recycle the old things. Because until these thing are not reached about the deadline.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, then, for example, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1049.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 234.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48290598291 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.18474156575 2.80592935109 78% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619658119658 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 329.4 506.74238477 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.3314020049 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.9285714286 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7142857143 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07142857143 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175530557058 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0546421066178 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0832740397885 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104957459748 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0754998653409 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 13.0946893788 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 50.2224549098 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 12.4159519038 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.93 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 78.4519038076 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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