Nowadays people waste a lot of food that was bought from shops and restaurants. Why do you think people waste food? What can be done to reduce the amount of food they throw away?
In this day and age, people show a propensity for buying foods from restaurants or groceries. This trend led to the wastage of food a lot which is caused by the increasing affordability of people. It can be tackled by giving some reasonable punishments and educate people how not to waste leftovers .
The main reason why people tend to throw away food that relating to lower cost. There are plenty kinds of food today which almost people can easily pay without a fear of expensive price. Therefore when they do not need to use unwanted food more, they can conveniently discard it as it does not squander too their money. Like for instance, street vendors and low-priced restaurants are kinds of places when usually catch sight of lots of different types of food with cheap price but serving us have some good meal , just less than one dollar.
So as to prevent food from being disposed of uneconomically to some extent, the restaurants should have some appropriate changes as to price to restrict people on wasting food. It is possible, restaurants should increase price level of dishes so that people have to be think things through before ordering any kind of food or they can charge extra for dishes which people do not use it up. Furthermore, Government should impose some suitable punishments onto people who waste food. This helps people restrain their frequent wasting habit. For example, If anyone has action to waste food, the authority will fine ten dollars for each of them. The more essential thing is that The authority should disseminate on useful news about saving food to raise people’s awareness and change gradually public’s attitude in consuming food responsibly
In conclusion, people seem to waste too much food and it slowly becomes their eating habit. It is of utmost necessary punitive measures as one way to deal with issues.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, so, therefore, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1547.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92675159236 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57860521503 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605095541401 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.5773417813 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.5 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4285714286 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64285714286 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.456306641706 0.244688304435 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.168262385194 0.084324248473 200% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0745115096267 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.273170114379 0.151304729494 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0817877229695 0.056905535591 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.