Recently, the trend of applying children to boarding school is gaining popularity among parents. In my point of view, this idea is a positive development because it provide more benefits that will be elaborated in the following paragraphs.
In this modern era, the majority of people including parents are getting busy with their work. In consequence, they have limited time for interacting and having quality time with their children. Moreover, they often put less attention to their children education. Therefore, the idea for sending their kids to hostel is becoming their first line of choice. The boarding schools will provide many benefits for children development both in academics and basic manners or soft skills sectors. In academics field, children will have more opportunity to discuss and to study their subject with friends in boarding school after their class so that they can improve their knowledge and communication skills. In addition, the more discussion between friends about school subjects, the more competitive atmosphere will be created. Hence, children will be more competitive in learning their subjects.
Regarding basic manners, staying at boarding school will teach children about discipline, punctuality, and tolerance. As we know, boarding schools normally have strict rules such as restriction in using gadgets and punishment for indiscipline manner. Moreover, living in boarding school would teach children to be tolerance and friendly to their friends which is beneficial to form their character. The more social interaction between them, the more they learn how to respect others and how to become kind in society even deal with diversity. Beside that, they will also learn how to cope with friendship problems which also teach them how to be a good problem solver.
To sum up, choosing boarding school children education will have many positive impact both in academic and personality development to our children.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'provides'?
Suggestion: provides
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...rents are getting busy with their work. In consequence, they have limited time for...
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Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to board'.
Suggestion: to board
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ersonality development to our children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, in addition, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1659.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47524752475 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71423604386 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547854785479 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.25 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.6875 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9375 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4375 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228245307015 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0884834090165 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0705690550431 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17992218287 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0498711823045 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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