With the world’s growing population, competition is also becoming stiff at a rapid rate. All parents want their children to be a topper everywhere to become successful and this thought make them to keep their children stressed all the time. In my opinion, this is a negative mentality and causes multiple detrimental effects on children’s life.
Firstly, if we look at parent’s point of view, they always want the best for their children and force their offspring to achieve great heights in their career for the sake of a good life. However, many of them don’t consider children human beings but a machine. Wanting children successful isn’t bad but forcing them beyond their capabilities to taste the fruit of success is.
Next, some parents have the tendency to choose everything for their children without even considering the choice of the child. This behaviour may lead children to do something; they can’t put their heart at. They try to finish the assignment or their studies half heartily which makes them a mediocre in their life eventually.
Parents should never pressurise their children for anything. Instead, they should ask for any opinion before taking any decision. Considering their thoughts before making a decision will make them think highly of themselves as well as their parents. It will boost their self-confidence up which will help them to face any obstacles in their future even when their parents are not around.
In essence, no one can force anyone to be something which he or she doesn’t want to be. It will only make the person rigid and rebellious. Parents should treat their children kindly and help them understand that failures are the part of life and cannot be evaded. Treating the children lovingly and kindly during their setbacks will help them to be successful professionally as well as personally.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, may, so, well, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1583.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19016393443 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78447340188 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577049180328 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.6868342543 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.1176470588 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9411764706 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05882352941 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28667975857 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105612024387 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0682972072924 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181101576103 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0407118207736 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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