In this modern generation, technology has become more advanced. In the present situation, everyone is aware of crimes due to security cameras and the Global Positioning System (GPS), and they use these factors to track crimes. Although this phenomenon brings a lack of privacy, I believe that it can bring awareness about committing crimes, which easily outweighs the adversities.
One of the primary advantages of monitoring is that it can easily reduce the number of crimes. For example, in supermarkets, where staff do not have sufficient time to check each and every customer, if they simply use security cameras to observe every customer, there will be no case for shoplifting. Similarly, nowadays people are becoming more advanced, they use the Global Positioning System (GPS) in their phones to track everything. If they lost their mobile, and if they had put GPS in their cellphone, it will be easier for them to track. It will help them find their mobile.
The downside of this scenario is that people are losing their privacy. For instance, many people are unaware of small cameras, in many hotels staff uses those small cameras for recording, which can help them to threaten their customers and they could get benefit from that, this case might put peoples in serious trouble. Additionally, another disadvantage is that people are being tracked in a negative way by criminals. In many cases, criminals are using the benefits of GPS. They put GPS in people's cars or phones, which can be helpful for them to track the places where they commit crimes like robbery and rape.
In conclusion, since this benefits people in becoming aware of crimes like shoplifting, the drawbacks like unaware of recording. In my opinion, the advantages easily outnumbered.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 390, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a negative way" with adverb for "negative"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...antage is that people are being tracked in a negative way by criminals. In many cases, criminals ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, similarly, as for, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in many cases, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1471.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0724137931 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67183531003 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541379310345 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.0114931142 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0666666667 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28999313761 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0933807824038 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514841843974 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161485810949 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0698089547205 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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