The table provides information about the number of sales of coffee and bananas in five different countries from 1999 to 2004.
Overall, it can be clearly seen that the UK was the most successful country for selling fair trade- labelled coffee and bananas throughout the period, while Sweden was in the least successful category over the year.
In detail, the number of coffee in the UK, with sales 1.5m in 1999, increased sharply by 20m in 2004, whereas Switzerland doubled its ratio from 3m in 1999, to 6m in 2004. Similarly, Denmark and Belgium increased their percentage by only 0.2 and 0.7 per cent in 2004. Sweden had the lowest figure for selling coffee compared to other countries, at 0.8 million in 1999, which increased minimally by 0.2 per cent at the end of the period.
Additionally, last year, the UK was on the top of the list in exchanges of bananas from 15m to 47m. Switzerland and Denmark experienced sharp growth in the number from 1m and 0.6m in the initial period to 5.5m and 4m in 2004, while Belgium and Sweden had the same pattern, their ratio decreased by 2 per cent in 2004 respectively
- The table shows the number of mobile phones and personal computers per 1000 people in 2003 in 6 different counties Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 89
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- In the past most people worked for small businesses while more people now work for large businesses What are the advantages and disadvantages of people working for large businesses 67
- An increase in the production of consumer goods results in damage of our natural environment What are the causes and solutions 78
- Some people think that school should reward students who show the best academic results while others believe that it is more important to reward students who show improvements Discuss both views and give your own opinion 56
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, similarly, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 918.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 197.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65989847716 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51891246231 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548223350254 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 252.9 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.4190742321 43.030603864 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.142857143 112.824112599 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1428571429 22.9334400587 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.14285714286 5.23603664747 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196629249152 0.215688989381 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108030231946 0.103423049105 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.126939460541 0.0843802449381 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160099786047 0.15604864568 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.144766499875 0.0819641961636 177% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.44 61.2550243902 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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