In this modern generation, people have different demands and desires, to fulfill their needs, they have to work in bigger companies as compared to the past. This phenomenon offers crucial benefits to people by providing satisfactory salaries, but it also comes with some drawbacks since people cannot balance their lives, which can affect their relationships with family.
The advantages of working in bigger companies are that they can get opportunities to learn various things about their working sectors because they could get chances to go overseas for business meetings, which helps them develop advanced ideas and gives them the chance to meet well-known members of their corporations. Similarly, another benefit is that they can get attractive salaries. For example, in the present situation, everything is becoming very expensive, and people have to face problems to afford their desires. So they prefer to work for large enterprises. Compared to small businesses, large corporations provide better facilities; they have advanced machines and techniques. that cannot be seen in small companies.
On the other hand, disadvantages include not being able to balance their personal lives. Working in large companies cannot be easy; people have to work 24/7, which makes them unable to balance their lives. This can create serious problems in their relationships with family members. For instance, if they do not spend much time with their children or partner, that could harm their relationship. Moreover, they can also suffer from health issues. If they are not able to take meals on time due to heavy work pressure, then it might cause health problems like gastritis.
In conclusion, working in reputed companies can benefit them to develop advanced ideas and good income. However, the downside of this situation is that they can fail to save their relationships due to work pressure.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 691, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: That
... have advanced machines and techniques. that cannot be seen in small companies. O...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, similarly, so, then, well, as for, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1602.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37583892617 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7111768124 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546979865772 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.3711733607 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.125 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.625 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0964698239237 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0374310356545 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0454868669647 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0751248546947 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0618895709655 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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